Raisho Young Ninja
Posts : 13 Join date : 2010-03-14 Age : 32 Location : Jordan's mind
| Subject: Raisho's Poem thread Sun Mar 14, 2010 3:12 pm | |
| These are some old ones I did haven't felt the urge to write in a while if I do I'll post more. I do this funky free form kinda deal sometimes rhymes sometimes doesn't it's really a love it or hate it kinda thing. A Gamers World - Spoiler:
A Gamer's World
There is no end as there was never a beginning They say its over but I say I'm winning The game is just begun Or is it already won?
I lose and I lose but who gets to choose Will I ever be done will I ever be finished? Will I ever be done will it ever be ended? The score never changes Though I seem to improve Who is it who gets to choose? Who wins and who has to lose. I'm stuck in this room This ever-changing room Just staring around me Observing my surroundings, Hoping for something more Something to adore Or maybe just a door A way out of this world? An end to this game? I continue to play in hopes I'll win someday
Me - Spoiler:
I am who I am that's all I can be I am who I am I just have to be me to those who would judge me I can’t make you see you don't have to believe in this life I would lead it is mine and not yours there is nothing more no gate or open door for you to be me for I to be ye for us to succeed together forever there is no such thing between you and me there can never be
I am who I am that's all I can be I am who I am I just have to be me I may not be the best but I will never be the rest no matter who you are you will always be a star in the eye of the beholder who looks over his shoulder to search for a follower who respects his decisions to search for a person to listen to his predictions but most have to wait until that perfect date when they find their mate who is chosen by fate until that day... I am who I am that's all I can be I am who I am I just have to be me
I am who I am that's all I can be I am who I am I just have to be me I'm as good as I can be and that's good enough for me as long as I try and keep open one eye I can hold my head high knowing what I did and why
others would criticize the life I would lead but no one can judge me for I shall succeed I am who I am that's all I can be I am who I am I just have to be me
Reach - Spoiler:
I reach for the sky I reach for a lie I see not a cloud Nor the sun nor a shroud There is nothing there Nothing but empty air And if I dare I can be there Alone in the sky Alone ever so high Will I find a light A path through the darkness I think not For the darkness is never-ending A light will shine a path But only if one is there Is there a path Here in the air Alone with no one here I cannot hide my fear I’m reaching for the sky In hopes I will not die
The Truth - Spoiler:
Truth has no synonyms Nothing is the same A word with such a diverse meaning No one can attain It would seem that truth is just an ideal And none can truly tell it For to truly tell the truth In fact you couldn’t conceal Not a lie nor a deception Not a fable nor a ruse To truly tell the truth in fact One must be attuned To all the secrets all the fibs All the guiles all the falsity No truth ever tells it all No truth is truly true
Conscience - Spoiler:
My conscience is my guide It takes me for a ride Anywhere anytime My conscience is my guide At the park or in the square My conscience takes me anywhere I see the sights and do what is right For my conscience watches day and night Consider this the truth I speak To be a conscience for the weak Find a way to help us all By doing what is right not wrong My conscience is my guide The truth I cannot hide For what I say and what I do Contain a secret just for you Live today and find a way To help us all find another day
Time - Spoiler:
I can see the future Can you see the past? I remember what will be And forget what has been In the future is the past But the past feels hidden A haze in my head Could it be that I was dead? The future or the past Which one has come at last? I can feel a pressure It pulls me away Away from my life Away from this strife Where is the future? Where is the past? I remember the day When I once ran away To look for the future And did find the past I searched for the presence To take me away And found but a vessel Leading to this day The past is forever The future nevermore I shall find the present No nothing more
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Kurcio Daimyo
Posts : 168 Join date : 2010-03-14 Location : Jodan's Armpits
| Subject: Re: Raisho's Poem thread Sun Mar 14, 2010 3:13 pm | |
| I swear, you're good. 10/10. | |
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45jordan78 Prince of Darkness
Posts : 143 Join date : 2010-03-14 Age : 34 Location : In my mind
| Subject: Re: Raisho's Poem thread Sun Mar 14, 2010 3:24 pm | |
| Woah... These are great!! 9.5/10. I'm a harsh rater. I've never given a 10/10 on anything. This is about as high as I've ever rated. | |
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Kurcio Daimyo
Posts : 168 Join date : 2010-03-14 Location : Jodan's Armpits
| Subject: Re: Raisho's Poem thread Mon Mar 15, 2010 5:26 pm | |
| So, is this going to be updated any time soon? | |
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sauske-arena Ninja
Posts : 104 Join date : 2010-03-18 Age : 28 Location : nz
| Subject: Re: Raisho's Poem thread Thu Mar 18, 2010 10:50 am | |
| these are probably the best i have seen so far 10/10 | |
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