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PostSubject: Kurcio's Poem   Sun Mar 14, 2010 2:58 pm

As I walked in the door,
All I saw,
Was the bitterness of the cat
And the roar of the dog.
My heart could not content
To such eagerness that was spared.
I wasn't sure... I wasn't sure...
Of anything.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurcio's Poem   Sun Mar 14, 2010 3:08 pm

Woah... That was different...
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PostSubject: Re: Kurcio's Poem   Sun Mar 14, 2010 3:11 pm

So it's bad. o.o
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PostSubject: Re: Kurcio's Poem   Sun Mar 14, 2010 3:18 pm

Not really. Just not great.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurcio's Poem   Sun Mar 14, 2010 3:19 pm

Yeah, I rushed it.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurcio's Poem   Thu Mar 18, 2010 10:51 am

it could improve if you put more effort into it
7.5
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PostSubject: Re: Kurcio's Poem   Thu Mar 18, 2010 6:03 pm

sauske-arena wrote:
it could improve if you put more effort into it
7.5
It was random but if you saw people's translation I bet you would give it a 10.
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